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    The Dream- Kailash Manasarovar

    Hari Om

    Namaste and greetings

    Have tried long and hard to write proper poetry and can not get the proper way of doing it. Cognitively, get all the rules, but when it comes time to write, can not seem to perform. So, will call this a story and hope you might enjoy.

    Om Namah Shivaya

    The Dream- Kailash Manasarovar

    I, big and strong, make journey to Mount Kailash, Home of Shiva
    Through Sadhana, nutrition, and training
    Complete with Visa
    Ready for attaining
    At the feet of Lord Shiva

    My gear, state of art
    Those of others, did they prepare on a lark?
    Day 1, a feeble old lady of Kashmir
    Stumbles over my gear
    I apologize and she bids me good cheer

    I, big and strong, am ready for this
    Does she belong? Her, I dismiss
    Day 15, twenty pounds lighter and egoless, no longer a fighter
    Stumble over what is left of my gear
    Caught by the old lady, she whispers in my ear

    Held by elbow by a gentle vise
    I look at the old lady who has only one eye
    And am gifted with this advice
    Shhh, with thumb to ear and finger to her one and only eye
    With this, collapse at the feet of the One with three but yet One eye

    Dreams of seeing the Divine Swan swim
    in the Holy Lake,
    Realized. This is no mistake.
    The truth of/is Mahādeva is illuminating, impossible to be dim
    At the home of Shiva/Shakti, no dream, awake.

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    Re: The Dream- Kailash Manasarovar

    Namaste,

    Very well written!

    Pranam.

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    Re: The Dream- Kailash Manasarovar

    Namaste

    Lovely to think of Siva and His abode and express it...

    Regards
    Ra K Sankar

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